WALT write a creative narrative story!
Once upon a time there was a person called Jimmy with a phoenix named Flame they were strolling through the desert and then suddenly the sky went dark Jimmy fell face first into the sand he gritted his teeth and looked up there stood a dark figure with glowing red eyes and no mouth his head was covered by a hood. what Jimmy shouted with shock. Muahahaha the figure screeched now that that blasted sun is gone I can finally take over the world. Who are you Jimmy squeaked? I am the moon master he replied now that everyone is in darkness I have control. For centuries I have waited and planned but I decided to make that sun disappear. Flame we have to light the sun in one swift motion he jumped on the back of his phoenix and away they went they dug and giant hole and brainstormed then Jimmy said why didn’t I think of this before you are a magical creature you can fly to the sun and light it he rummaged in his bag and pulled a convenient space suit from it here's something I prepared earlier. Moments later they were soaring up and up until there was no gravity. I think that is it that humongous black rock they circled it a couple of times and then roar a jet of flames burst from flames beak. They quickly dashed away back to earth. There was the moon master screaming noooooo how and then he crumpled ford collapsing in a pile of ash and they all lived happily ever after.
The end
Ha ha ha. That was very entertaining! Good effort Kylan.
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