Final Draft - My Mum

WALT to write a description of our mum using precise words to create an image in our readers minds.

My mum Julianne

My mum has mahogany, brown, long, twisty hair down to about her shoulders. Her favourite colour is blue. She has sparkly sky-blue eyes, she is tall. She likes to wear a purple and black T-shirt and black track pants and jet black sunglasses. Mum loves reading e-books at night, likes watching country calendar and absolutely loves coffee. She has affection for our black and white cows and pats them all the time. She reads to me every night and always gives me a big hug in the morning. Mum loves our snowy white dog case too.

I love reading with mum. We always feed the hungry calves together. Sometimes we watch movies on Netflix. She always  makes me yummy lunch. I’m just saying I love my mum so much, she makes me feel so happy. I think she is the best mum ever!!!