I am a Year 3 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Whaea Deb is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feedforward. Other times I will share my final published pieces.
Friday, May 28, 2021
Ngāti Kurī Proud by Tim Tipene
First Draft Mahuika show
28/5/21
We are learning to re-tell a story in our own words.
Once upon a time kahu was chasing sissy and trying to get her to do her jobs. Nan said stop doing that and come help me with this job. Nan kahu said why dose sissy always run away when its time to do jobs? well we all do our parts to help, I guess said kahu. Then sissy whizzed past and Nan caught sissy and said you to stay here. Out of the corner of there eyes the saw a kete and when they opened it Nan tuned to coal. hello said Potiki I am the last flaming finger nail of mahuika.
Then he realised what he had done to Nan. He said oh no I will have to go to the underground to get my mum to take the curse off of her. when they got close pukeko saw them.
- Next steps
- Re-craft - how can you improve your writing?
- Quality vocabulary
- Elaboration
- Check punctuation and any spelling errors
Thursday, May 27, 2021
Descriptive writing
WALT describe nouns using adjectives .
we are learning to write using nouns and adjectives. both on our devises and learning books.Aswell
Sunday, May 16, 2021
ANZAC Day
We have ANZAC Day to honour the soldiers that fought for us. we remember that they risked their lives for us. On ANZAC Day we go to dawn parades at memorials to commemorate the soldiers . We wear poppies because they were the first flowers to grow on the battle fields after the war. We also wear our ancestors medals, sing and say prayers.